Thursday, January 10, 2013

Destiny

My destiny is not your destiny

For your destiny is stupidity

For your solution is humanity

That you have left it in modernity

For you sing and speak in such a fear

And wish destiny make you a dear

For you live a dull life as dark as coal

I detest this with all my heart and soul


For you trust no one but your stingy self

Like a jar of honey on a broken shelf

For as long as you keep this in mere chain

Your reward shall be nothing but bitter pain

For you break broken hearts like a wooden twig

How you expect the next guy, not be a pig?

Alireza Manzour 
June 12, 2012

20 comments:

  1. Very beautiful. Ryan

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  2. Very beautiful. Ryan

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    1. Thank you Ryan; it was meant to be hard and harsh but i'm glad you found it to be beautiful.

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    2. YOUR WELCOME REVOLUTIONARY WRITER

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  3. GREAT POEM MR ALI! (y)

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  4. TEE HEEE. So VERY NAICE. IT IS LIKE MIND- BLASTING. IF YOU HAVEN"T READ IT YOU HAVE MISS HALF OF YOUR LIFE.

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  5. A little light for the vocabulary and subject discussed, and you get the feeling that it was contrived rather than free-flowing.

    Unknown out.

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  6. Unknown my dear,is that supposed to be comforting complement or a critical criticism I should take seriously?

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  7. I LOVE RICE AND MATHS!!!!

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  8. Masterful, truly wonderful Ali. I would like to see more works like these in the future. I was moved the the straightforwardness of the poem, the literal and clear meaning to each of your words. I would like to see more of this in the future, keep it up!

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  9. It was my destiny to like this. and my destiny to ask u to do a poem about cheese

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  10. Now I know the true meaning of destiny.
    -Fatihah and Sanje

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  11. This poem means a lot, meaningful and sends a message to everyone.

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  12. This is a masterpiece. I loved the straightforwardness and literal and clear meaning of all your words, keep up the good work !

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  13. i have another one


    What if I never knew
    What if I never found you
    I'd never have this feeling in my heart
    How did this come to be
    I don't know how you found me
    But from the moment I saw you
    Deep inside my heart I knew
    Baby your my destiny
    You and I were meant to be
    With all my heart and soul
    I give my love to have and hold
    And as far as I can see
    You were always meant to be my destiny
    I wanted some one like you
    Someone that I could hold on to
    And give my love until the end of time
    But forever was just a word, just a word
    Something I'd only heard about
    But now your always there for me
    When you say forever I'll believe
    Baby your my destiny
    You and I were meant to be
    With all my heart and soul
    I give my love to have and hold
    And as far as I can see
    You were always meant to be my destiny
    Maybe all we need is just a little faith
    Cause baby I believe that love will find a way
    Baby your my destiny
    You and I were meant to be
    With all my heart and soul
    I give my love to have and hold
    And as far as I can see
    From now until eternity
    You were always meant to be
    My destiny
    Your my destiny

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  14. She left u because u are fat and broke . Try not be cringe , pls .
    (u smell and iz baldz xddddddddd muhammad VVVVV)

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