My destiny is not your destiny
For your destiny is stupidity
For your solution is humanity
That you have left it in modernity
For you sing and speak in such a fear
And wish destiny make you a dear
For you live a dull life as dark as coal
I detest this with all my heart and soul
For you trust no one but your stingy self
Like a jar of honey on a broken shelf
For as long as you keep this in mere chain
Your reward shall be nothing but bitter pain
For you break broken hearts like a wooden twig
How you expect the next guy, not be a pig?
Alireza Manzour
June 12, 2012
Very beautiful. Ryan
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful. Ryan
ReplyDeleteThank you Ryan; it was meant to be hard and harsh but i'm glad you found it to be beautiful.
DeleteYOUR WELCOME REVOLUTIONARY WRITER
DeleteLOL
ReplyDeleteGREAT POEM MR ALI! (y)
ReplyDeleteTEE HEEE. So VERY NAICE. IT IS LIKE MIND- BLASTING. IF YOU HAVEN"T READ IT YOU HAVE MISS HALF OF YOUR LIFE.
ReplyDeleteA little light for the vocabulary and subject discussed, and you get the feeling that it was contrived rather than free-flowing.
ReplyDeleteUnknown out.
Unknown my dear,is that supposed to be comforting complement or a critical criticism I should take seriously?
ReplyDeleteI LOVE RICE AND MATHS!!!!
ReplyDeleteMasterful, truly wonderful Ali. I would like to see more works like these in the future. I was moved the the straightforwardness of the poem, the literal and clear meaning to each of your words. I would like to see more of this in the future, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteIt was my destiny to like this. and my destiny to ask u to do a poem about cheese
ReplyDeletemy destiny..
ReplyDeleteNow I know the true meaning of destiny.
ReplyDelete-Fatihah and Sanje
This poem means a lot, meaningful and sends a message to everyone.
ReplyDeleteThis is a masterpiece. I loved the straightforwardness and literal and clear meaning of all your words, keep up the good work !
ReplyDeletewonderful poem
ReplyDeletei have another one
ReplyDeleteWhat if I never knew
What if I never found you
I'd never have this feeling in my heart
How did this come to be
I don't know how you found me
But from the moment I saw you
Deep inside my heart I knew
Baby your my destiny
You and I were meant to be
With all my heart and soul
I give my love to have and hold
And as far as I can see
You were always meant to be my destiny
I wanted some one like you
Someone that I could hold on to
And give my love until the end of time
But forever was just a word, just a word
Something I'd only heard about
But now your always there for me
When you say forever I'll believe
Baby your my destiny
You and I were meant to be
With all my heart and soul
I give my love to have and hold
And as far as I can see
You were always meant to be my destiny
Maybe all we need is just a little faith
Cause baby I believe that love will find a way
Baby your my destiny
You and I were meant to be
With all my heart and soul
I give my love to have and hold
And as far as I can see
From now until eternity
You were always meant to be
My destiny
Your my destiny
UR MOM GEAY
ReplyDeleteShe left u because u are fat and broke . Try not be cringe , pls .
ReplyDelete(u smell and iz baldz xddddddddd muhammad VVVVV)