Monday, January 20, 2014

Flora

Friday dawn, the fortnight shall come for us to meet
Arrive at Grand hall, in air fall, and drop in feet

Through glass walls, I'll see that beautiful smile of yours
Walking to you, opening all those daunting doors

The daring day shall come for us to hold in hands
Lay down on the shore where I write your name on sands

Twilight time will twinkle the sparkle in your eyes
Those diamonds glitter like the sun longing to rise

Morning sky shall shine,  we're up to climb mounts so high
Where I kneel in snow white, and ask for us to tie

The moment will come for us to gaze, dive and drown
Dreaming you're my queen and kingdom, wearing the crown

Sunset brings that golden heart, on your chest, a gift
The token is our love, so we may never drift

The night shall fall and so I'll hold you in my arms
I'll promise to love you, forever safe, no harms

I'll be the sword, your soldier, castle is our home
Our throne is glory, eternal, bright like the Dome

Days will pass, seasons fall, years go by, so we age
Our story goes chapters never reach the last page

For I have hope, we're truly destined as one
You're the blossom, the flower, my Flora, like none

Alireza Manzour
December 13, 2013

19 comments:

  1. WHERE DO YOU GET YOUR INSPIRATION FROM??

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  2. Why a FLOWER out of ALL THE THINGS you can write about?

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    1. Because he loves flowers

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  3. You would be much more liberated in free verse, to be honest. Rhyming couplets, while suited to the days of old, unfortunately is a bit contrived, especially when combined with the very strict meter you're going for. In the modern day, we use shorter words in compared to the past, so it's harder to make the meter sound genuine, especially since you've chosen to write it in hexameter rather than in pentameter.

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  4. It very romantic yet cheesy. I really enjoyed the poem, I think every girl would. :) Good job, keep up the good work! :p

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  6. Very Interesting but too deep :3

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  7. the previous comment was...." Deep,VeryDeep. You said it was for someone...So definitely heartfelt :D

    "Where I kneel in snow white, and ask for us to tie"
    Who is that someone special???

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  8. This post is so sweet it gave me diabetes.

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    1. Thats mean, you will perish on the fields of tables.

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