Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Love is blind

God, I've got a question to ask you fair
Did you happen to know that love is blind

We fall in its pit and then break our bones
And although in pain, we bleed, we don't mind

We're torn apart, ripped open, scratched and scrubbed
But then we forget, leave the scars behind

And when all of that love ends in demise
We are left with just flashbacks, go rewind

No wonder Puck says 'fool these mortals be'
Since we only recall how we drank n' dined

We do devour love with so much content
When to me, it's more like poison refined

We begin to jump from one loser to another
Lost, lonely, look for someone of a kind

We're mercilessly shattered, squeezed and squashed
Have our hearts ripped open from rib then grind

Yet it's amazing how fast we forget
That not long ago from love we'd resigned 

We keep losing games of love one by one
Yet reject we'd failed, have it redefined

And so we search, seek for the selfless love
When we know well, that's impossible to find

And no matter how bad, bitter the taste
We don't want anyone bother us to remind

We desperately hope, to make the next one right
But I wonder if it's more like mistakes denied

Alireza Manzour
00.00 04.02.2016

31 comments:

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  2. This is a really powerful poem by: Kiki

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  3. Mr Ali best poem ever.by kong hong ian

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  4. Mr Ali, this poem is good ������ - See Jay

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  5. Mr Ali your poem was awesome. By Julian

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  6. VERL GOOOOOOd !!!!!!!!! but I don't understand - Christy :(

    SO NICE AND SWEET but not as sweet as my Nexus 😂 _ Charmaine

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    1. Aiyerrrr Charmaine got boy friend liao yerrrrrr Aiyerrrrrrr Aiyoi yoi shooo sweet siaaaa haizzzz

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  7. Mr.Ali it was thoughtful and very meaningful by: M.Aniq

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  8. Explains "love" pretty well. This poem is awesome Mr Ali. 9.8/10 Awesome but of course, no one is perfect.

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  9. is not as good as the flora one ..... i like the flora one more - christy :)

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  10. What do u mean by Puck?

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  12. Mr.Ali the poem is sweet it almost make me cry cause suddenly the word can be like spike went into my heart and kill the emotions and it will make me a better person that i am form that day and even i can still remember cause there were not a delete button in my mind love oscar

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  13. It's like I don't have to ask who's Puck since everyone asked, Puck is a clever, mischievous elf, sprite or jester that personifies the wise knave. In the play, Shakespeare introduces Puck as the "shrewd and knavish sprite" and "that merry wanderer of the night" in some scenes it would seem that he is longing for freedom and he is also a jester to Oberon, the fairy king. Puck and Bottom are the only two characters who interact and progress the three central stories in the whole play; Puck is the one who is first introduced in the fairies' story and creates the drama of the lovers' story by breaking up a young couple lost in an enchanted forest, as well as by placing the ass on Bottom's head in his story. Similarly, Bottom is performing in a play in his story intending it to be presented in the lovers' story as well as interacting with Titania in the fairies' story. is it this guy?

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  14. Mr ali the best teacher everrrrrrrr and he's the best at writing poems

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  15. Have a nice holiday guys! HAVE FUN m9s no-scope ;)

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  17. Friendship is more impotent then relationship ��

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